Dr. Elena Vasquez had spent fifteen years studying evolutionary biology before she understood what she was really witnessing every Saturday in the stadium below her office window. The crowd of ninety thousand wasn’t just watching a game—they were participating in an artificial selection process as carefully orchestrated as any laboratory experiment.
“You see it now, don’t you?” her colleague Professor Chen had asked her months earlier, when she’d first voiced her growing unease. “We’ve created synthetic fitness functions for our own species.”
Elena pressed her palm against the cool glass, watching the players warm up on the field. Each athlete represented the culmination of decades of selective pressure: height, speed, muscle fiber composition, reaction time, pain tolerance—all optimised through a system that masqueraded as entertainment but functioned as something far more systematic.
The machine worked through layers of artificial scarcity. Only the fastest, strongest, most aggressive individuals could advance through high school programs. College scholarships filtered the population further, demanding not just physical excellence but the psychological capacity to subordinate individual welfare to institutional goals. Professional leagues skimmed the apex of this pyramid, creating celebrities from genetic outliers who could perform superhuman feats under pressure.
But the truly insidious part, Elena realised, wasn’t the selection itself—it was how completely unnecessary it all was. Unlike natural selection, which responded to environmental pressures that threatened survival, this system created arbitrary challenges that served no biological purpose. No human needed to run a four-minute mile or bench press twice their body weight to thrive in the modern world. These abilities were as functionally useless as peacock feathers, yet the culture had convinced entire populations to organise their lives around achieving them.
The geopolitical dimension was even more disturbing. Elena had studied how different nations invested billions in sports programs that functioned as soft power projection. Olympic medal counts became proxies for national strength. Countries systematically identified children with favourable genetic markers and funnelled them into training programs that consumed their entire childhoods. The athletes became unwitting ambassadors in competitions that were really about demonstrating which political systems could most efficiently convert human potential into performance metrics.
She thought about Dmitri, the Russian gymnast she’d interviewed last year, who had been selected at age six based on his limb proportions and joint flexibility. By eighteen, he had won three gold medals and suffered permanent spinal damage. His government had celebrated him as a hero while his body was systematically destroyed in service of proving Soviet training methods superior to American ones. The Cold War had ended, but the machinery of human optimisation it had spawned continued grinding forward, finding new justifications for its existence.
Elena’s research had revealed the psychological mechanisms that made the system so resilient. Humans seemed biologically programmed to seek tribal identity through competitive dominance. Sports provided a safe outlet for aggressive impulses that might otherwise manifest as actual warfare. The problem was that this channelling required constant escalation—bigger athletes, more extreme training, higher stakes—to maintain the same emotional satisfaction.
Professional leagues understood this perfectly. They manufactured scarcity through salary caps and draft systems, ensuring that only the most genetically exceptional individuals could participate. Television broadcasts used sophisticated editing to amplify the drama, making viewers feel they were witnessing gladiatorial combat rather than arbitrary physical contests. The mythology of “natural talent” obscured the reality that most elite performance resulted from identifying favourable genetic variations and then subjecting them to years of systematic exploitation.
The cruellest irony was how completely the participants bought into their own commodification. Elena had interviewed hundreds of athletes who spoke passionately about personal growth, character development, and pursuing excellence. They genuinely believed their suffering served higher purposes, even as they were sorted and discarded by systems that valued them only for their measurable outputs.
From her window, Elena watched the teams line up for the national anthem. Thousands of young people had been filtered out to produce these forty-four individuals, their bodies representing the current local maximum of human physical optimisation. The crowd rose in unison, celebrating not just their team but their participation in a process that took the most fundamental human drive—the desire to improve and compete—and weaponised it for purposes that had nothing to do with actual human flourishing.
The game began, and Elena turned away from the window. She had work to do—research that might help people understand what was being done to them in the name of entertainment and national pride. The selection engine would continue running whether she watched or not, grinding human potential into spectacle, turning children into gladiators, and convincing entire civilisations that this transformation represented progress rather than the systematic cultivation of beautiful, unnecessary suffering.
Outside, the crowd roared its approval as one optimised human body collided with another, each impact a data point in humanity’s strangest experiment: the deliberate evolution of abilities no one actually needed, pursued with religious devotion by populations who had forgotten they were both the scientists and the subjects.
Tag: creative writing
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The Selection Engine
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Mannequins of London
© 2025 By Cydonis Heavy Industries, (C.H.I), Ltd.
The cacophony of London in 2024 was a familiar roar to Chi – the rumble of the Tube, the distant wail of sirens, the incessant chatter of a thousand conversations. But lately, Chi had started noticing a new kind of silence within the noise: the silence of the Unseen. These weren’t ghosts, but people whose faces, the very maps of their identities, were increasingly obscured, not by choice, but by the creeping demands of modern life.
It had begun subtly, almost unnoticed. The delivery riders, once a kaleidoscope of individuals, were now mostly hidden behind identical branded helmets and pollution masks, their expressions lost, their presence reduced to a fleeting transaction. Then came the sanitation workers, their features already often shielded by practical gear, now almost entirely erased behind new, council-mandated “hygiene optimisation units” – full-face visors that reflected the grey London sky. The justifications were always sensible: air quality, safety protocols, efficiency.
Chi ran a small repair shop in a quiet Camden backstreet, a relic of a place filled with the scent of old leather, warm solder, and brewing tea. They mended things that Londoners were quick to discard – worn-out shoes, cracked phone screens, beloved but broken household gadgets. It was in this haven of the tangible that the creeping anonymity felt most stark.
One rainy Tuesday, a woman entered, her face entirely hidden by a sleek, matte-black “PrivacyPlus” mask, a trendy piece of tech that projected a serene, generic human face onto its outer surface. It was advertised as a way to “navigate the urban environment with minimal social friction.” She carried a child’s battered Paddington Bear.
“It’s stopped talking,” she said, her voice slightly synthesized by the mask. “Needs fixing.”
“Of course,” Chi replied, taking the bear. “Does your little one miss his voice?”
The projected face on the
mask didn’t change. “The child, designation ‘Primary User,’ requires the auditory stimulus for its developmental schedule. Please ensure it’s operational by Thursday.”
“Primary User?” Chi echoed, a familiar chill settling in. “Not… their name?”
The serene projection flickered almost imperceptibly. “Names are for personal interactions. This is a functional requirement.”
Chi mended the bear, carefully stitching a loose seam and replacing the tiny voice chip. When the woman returned, Chi tried again. “I managed to get a few classic Paddington phrases on there. I hope Primary User likes them.”
The mask remained impassive. “Standard functionality is all that’s required. Emotional variables are counterproductive to scheduling.”
The trend continued. Baristas in chain coffee shops wore transparent masks with pre-printed, unnervingly consistent smiles. Security guards at new developments stood behind reflective visors, becoming faceless enforcers of private space. The narrative, subtly woven into news feeds and corporate wellness blogs, spoke of “streamlined interactions,” “enhanced focus,” and “personal emotional resource management.”
Chi saw the subtle rebellions. The delivery rider who’d stuck a tiny, faded band sticker to the back of his helmet. The barely perceptible sigh from behind a barista’s printed smile when the card machine glitched again. These were the whispers of individuality fighting to breathe.
One late evening, as Chi was locking up, they noticed a figure slumped against the bins in the alley. It was a street cleaner, their orange hi-vis and council-issue visor making them an anonymous fixture of the urban landscape. But tonight, the visor was askew, pushed up slightly. Beneath it, Chi saw not a blank space, but a pair of red-rimmed eyes, exhausted and unmistakably human.
Chi hesitated. Every instinct honed by London life screamed to walk on, to not get involved. But the raw vulnerability in those eyes was a hook. Chi unlocked the shop door again, emerging a moment later with a steaming mug.
“Long night?” Chi offered, holding out the tea.
The figure startled, pulling the visor down instinctively before seeming to reconsider, pushing it up again. A tired nod. A hand, chapped and work-worn, reached for the mug.
“Sometimes,” a voice, rough and unmodulated, finally came, “you just feel like part of the pavement, don’t you? Just another thing to be cleaned around, not seen.”
Chi sat on an overturned crate, the alley damp and smelling of stale bins and rain. They didn’t ask for a name, didn’t pry. They just shared the silence, the warmth of the tea a small comfort against the London chill.
The city thrummed on, its millions rushing, its screens glowing with curated lives and anonymous interactions. But here, in this forgotten alley, something real had passed between two people. Chi knew it wouldn’t change the city overnight. But it was a start. It was the quiet, determined act of seeing, of acknowledging the person behind the function, the face behind the mask. And in those small, human connections, Chi believed, lay the hope that London’s true faces would not be entirely erased.
A few weeks later, the chill of late autumn had truly set in, biting through Chi’s coat as they descended into the labyrinthine tunnels of the Northern Line. The usual evening rush was a tide of downcast eyes and hurried footsteps, each person encased in their own bubble of music, podcasts, or weary thoughts. The air was thick with the metallic tang of brakes and the stale breath of the Underground.
Then, a raw sound ripped through the ambient din. It wasn’t the usual busker’s melody or a drunken argument. It was a howl of pure despair.
“End it! For God’s sake, someone help me fucking end it! I can’t fucking live like this anymore! You did this to me! All of you! YOU FUCKING SHITHEADS!! YOU FUCKING MONSTERS!!! FUCKING KILL MEEEE!!!”
The commuters flinched, a ripple of discomfort passing through the crowd. Most quickened their pace, eyes fixed firmly ahead or on their screens, expertly navigating around the source of the disturbance. It was the London way – don’t make eye contact, don’t engage. Stiff upper lip, etcetera. ‘Keep calm and carry on.’
Chi, however, paused. Leaning against the grimy tiles of a connecting tunnel, a man was crumpled like a discarded newspaper. His clothes were rags, his face, unobscured by any mask or visor, was a roadmap of suffering – dirt-streaked, hollow-cheeked, with eyes that burned with a desperate, terrifying light. He wasn’t just Unseen in the new, technologically-mediated way; he was the old kind of Unseen, the kind society had always tried to ignore.
“Look at me!” he screamed, his voice cracking. “Look what you’ve made! A ghost in your machine! I had a life! A job! A… a face!” He clawed at his own cheeks, his nails leaving faint red trails. “Now I’m just… refuse! Something to be swept away!”
A few coins rattled into the stained blanket at his feet, tossed from a safe distance. No one stopped. No one spoke to him. He was a problem, a disturbance, a broken part of the city’s machinery that was best ignored.
His gaze, wild and unfocused, snagged on Chi, who hadn’t moved. For a moment, his tirade faltered. He stared at Chi, a flicker of something unreadable in his eyes – confusion, perhaps, or a desperate plea for acknowledgement beyond the cursory charity.
“You,” he rasped, his voice dropping to a conspiratorial, broken whisper. “You see it, don’t you? They don’t even look. They just want us gone. Easier if we just… disappear.” He gestured vaguely towards the tracks as a train thundered past, the gust of wind pressing his thin clothes against his skeletal frame.
Chi’s heart ached. This was a rawer, more brutal form of the dehumanisation they witnessed daily. This wasn’t about efficient masks or streamlined interactions; this was about a life shattered, a person reduced to begging for their own oblivion in the belly of the city.
Chi took a slow step forward, then another, acutely aware of the averted gazes of the other commuters. They knelt, not too close, but enough to break the invisible barrier of indifference. They had no easy answers, no platitudes to offer. What could one say to a man so utterly broken?
“I see you,” Chi said softly, their voice barely audible above the rumble of another approaching train. “I see your face.”
The man stared, his wild eyes focusing on Chi’s with an unnerving intensity. The anger seemed to drain out of him, replaced by a vast, cavernous emptiness. A single tear traced a clean path through the grime on his cheek. He didn’t speak for a long moment, the only sounds the distant clatter of the trains and the hushed footsteps of people hurrying by, their faces resolutely turned away.
Then, his lips, chapped and pale, moved. “A face…” he whispered, the words barely formed. “I used to… I used to carve them. Little wooden birds. Each one different.” His gaze drifted past Chi, to some point in the grimy tunnel wall, as if seeing those birds take flight. “They had character. Not like… not like these.” He gestured weakly at the fleeting blurs of commuters, their features either hidden or hardened into masks of indifference.
The flicker of memory faded, and the despair returned to his eyes, though the frantic edge was somewhat blunted. He looked back at Chi, a profound weariness settling over him. “No one wants birds anymore. Just… efficiency.”
Chi reached into their bag and pulled out a small, foil-wrapped bar of chocolate – emergency rations for long days. They offered it to him. He looked at it, then at Chi, and for a second, something like surprise registered. Slowly, his hand, trembling, reached out and took it. His fingers brushed Chi’s, and the contact was like a spark of warmth in the cold, damp air.
He didn’t thank Chi, not in words. But his eyes held theirs for a moment longer, a silent, desolate acknowledgement. Then he looked down at the chocolate bar, turning it over in his hands as if it were a precious, forgotten artifact.
The moment stretched, fragile and heavy. Chi knew they couldn’t stay. They couldn’t solve the vast, systemic failures that had led this man to such a desperate place. Another train was approaching, its roar growing louder, a reminder of the relentless pulse of the city that had no time for such quiet miseries.
“Take care,” Chi said, the words feeling inadequate, almost absurd. They stood up, their knees stiff.
The man didn’t look up again. He was absorbed in the small chocolate bar, his shoulders hunched, a solitary island in the river of humanity flowing past.
As Chi walked towards their platform, the man’s whispered words echoed in their mind: “I used to carve them… Each one different.” It was a stark reminder of what was being lost – not just faces, but the unique stories, the individual crafts, the very essence of the people behind them. The encounter left Chi with a profound sadness, but also a strengthened, albeit heavy, resolve. Seeing was not enough, but it was where everything had to start. The city’s unseen faces were not just obscured by masks and visors; some were simply worn down by life until they became invisible. And those, Chi thought, were perhaps the hardest to bring back into the light. -
(More^2) Lunar Dreams…
Fuelling a Lunar Dream: Could Water Launch a Probe from Shetland?
Imagine a rocket standing tall on one of the rugged Shetland Islands, ready to embark on an incredible journey. It’s destination? A free return trajectory around the Moon. And it’s fuel? Water, split into its fundamental components, hydrogen and oxygen, using renewable energy from the very winds and sun of the islands.
It might (to some) sound like science fiction, but the concept of using water as a propellant source for hydrolox (liquid hydrogen and liquid oxygen) engines is very real. The question is: how much water would you actually need to send a 100kg probe on such a mission from a place like Shetland?
Let’s dive into the fascinating physics and engineering challenges involved! ^_^v
The Rocket Science Behind the Splash.
Launching anything into space, especially towards the Moon, requires overcoming Earth’s powerful gravity and achieving immense speeds. This is where the concept of Delta-v (Δv) comes in. Think of Δv as the total “change in velocity” capability your rocket needs to have. For a lunar free return trajectory, starting from Earth’s surface, the required Δv is substantial – thousands of meters per second. Launching from a higher latitude like Shetland means you get slightly less help from the Earth’s spin compared to equatorial launch sites, potentially increasing that Δv requirement a little.
The efficiency of a rocket engine is measured by its Specific Impulse (Isp). Hydrolox engines are known for having high Isp, meaning they get a lot of thrust for the amount of propellant they consume. Our hypothetical engine has a 40% efficiency. This efficiency factor impacts the effective Isp the engine can achieve in the real world, making it lower than the theoretical maximum.
The Tyranny of the Rocket Equation!
The core principle governing how much propellant you need is the Tsiolkovsky Rocket Equation:
Δv=Isp⋅g0⋅ln(mf/m0)
Where:
- Δv is our required change in velocity.
- Isp is the engine’s effective specific impulse.
- g0 is standard gravity.
- m0 is the initial mass of the rocket (with propellant).
- mf is the final mass of the rocket (without propellant), also called the dry mass.
The crucial part here is the mass ratio (mf:m0). This equation tells us that to achieve a certain Δv with a given engine efficiency (Isp), you need a specific mass ratio. The higher the Δv or the lower the Isp, the larger the mass ratio must be. This means the vast majority of your rocket’s initial mass has to be propellant.
Figure 1:
This graph illustrates how the required mass ratio (initial mass / final mass) escalates rapidly with increasing Delta-v for a fixed engine efficiency (Specific Impulse). Achieving higher speeds requires a disproportionately larger amount of propellant to climb out of Earth’s gravity well, and escape the monstrous ‘homo sapiens singularis’ below.
The Dry Mass Challenge.
The dry mass (mf) isn’t just the 100kg probe. It includes the rocket’s structure, engines, fuel tanks, guidance systems, and importantly, the equipment needed to split the water and power the process using renewables. We’re assuming a structural mass fraction of 1/8. In rocketry terms, this usually relates the mass of the structure to the total mass or dry mass, and a fraction like 1/8 suggests a very lightweight structure relative to the total vehicle or dry mass. In our water-splitting scenario, we also need to account for the mass of the electrolysis unit and the power generation/storage system (solar panels, wind turbine components, batteries).
The electrolysis efficiency (~37%) tells us how much of the energy input actually goes into splitting the water. A lower efficiency means you need a more powerful, and likely heavier, power system to produce the required amount of hydrogen and oxygen within a reasonable timeframe for fuelling. This adds to the dry mass.
Putting Numbers to the Dream (An Illustrative Example).
Let’s try a simplified calculation based on some assumptions, similar to how engineers start to size a rocket:
- Target Δv: Let’s assume a challenging but plausible Δv requirement of 10,000 m/s for this mission from Shetland.
- Effective Isp: Using a typical hydrolox vacuum Isp and considering the 40% engine efficiency (interpreted as an overall efficiency factor applied to the theoretical Isp potential), let’s work with an effective Isp of around 400 seconds.
- Payload Mass: 100 kg.
- Dry Mass Estimate: This is the trickiest part. The structural mass fraction of 1/8 is very optimistic if applied to the whole vehicle. Let’s instead estimate the combined mass of the structure, engine, tanks, guidance, plus the electrolysis and power equipment. For a mission like this, this supporting mass could easily be several times the payload mass. Let’s illustrate by assuming this combined mass is 5 times the payload, or 500 kg.
- So, the estimated dry mass (mf) = Payload (100 kg) + Structure & Equipment (500 kg) = 600 kg.
“No magic conjures, no void finds, mind(s) travels, light shines…”
Now, using the Tsiolkovsky equation to find the required mass ratio for Δv=10000 m/s and Isp=400 s:
ln(mf/m0)=Isp⋅g0Δv=400 s⋅9.81 m/s210000 m/s≈2.55
mf/m0=e2.55≈12.8
The required mass ratio is about 12.8. This means the initial mass (m0) must be 12.8 times the dry mass (mf).
m0=12.8⋅mf=12.8⋅600 kg=7680 kg.
The propellant mass (mp) is the difference between the initial mass and the dry mass:
mp=m0−mf=7680 kg−600 kg=7080 kg.
This 7080 kg is the total mass of hydrogen and oxygen needed. Since water (H₂O) splits into hydrogen (H₂) and oxygen (O₂) in a mass ratio of approximately 1:8, the total mass of water required to produce this propellant is also 7080 kg (mass is conserved in the splitting).
Finally, converting mass to volume using the density of water (approx. 1 kg/litre):
Volume of water = 7080 kg/1 kg/litre=7080 litres.
The Verdict (with *Big* Caveats!)
Based on our illustrative calculation with several key assumptions (especially about the required Δv and the mass of the rocket structure and equipment), you would need on the order of 7,000 litres of water to fuel a rocket launching a 100kg probe on a free return trajectory to the Moon from the Shetland Islands using hydrolox derived from that water.
This figure is an estimate, not a precise engineering number. A real mission design would involve complex trajectory analysis, detailed mass breakdowns of every component (including the renewable power system and electrolysis unit, influenced by the 37% efficiency), and careful optimisation. A structural mass fraction of 1/8, it seems, is likely very optimistic for a real-world rocket capable of this mission profile.
Nevertheless, our concept is compelling – harnessing local, renewable resources in a unique location like the Shetland Islands to reach for the Moon. It highlights the incredible engineering challenges and the vast quantities of propellant needed for space travel, even for relatively small payloads.
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Cosmic Dungeon, Cosmic Garden
By Cydonis Heavy Industries, ©️2025.
All rights reserved.
Chapter One.
The year is 2242. Humanity, though still grappling with its terrestrial issues, had finally begun to stretch its fingers beyond the Kuiper Belt. Outposts dotted the major moons, and automated mining facilities hummed in the asteroid fields. The next frontier, the true deep black, was the Oort Cloud – the vast, icy shell surrounding the Solar System, holding billions of potential resources and offering a launch-pad to the stars.
It was during the commissioning of the Odyssey, the first crewed long-range explorer, launched from a dry dock construction facility in orbit around Mars, and carefully, precisely, designed for interstellar precursor missions into the Oort Cloud, that they hit the wall. Not a physical wall, but something far stranger. Something that terrified everyone in the astronomical union to death.
As the Odyssey reached the calculated inner edge of the Cloud, deep space comms crackled.
“Approaching designated coordinates,” Commander Eva Rostova’s voice was calm, professional. “Sensors show… interference. Gravitational readings are stable, no immediate hazards detected.”
Then, a scream. Not of pain, but of impossible, visceral terror. Followed by silence. Utter, unnerving silence.
Rescue probes were dispatched immediately. They carried cameras, sensors, and even biological samples in shielded containers. The probes themselves zipped through the region where the Odyssey had vanished without issue. Their cameras transmitted bizarre, swirling patterns of energy that seemed to coalesce just beyond the edge of the known Oort Cloud. The biological samples, however, returned inert, reduced to fine, inorganic dust within their containers. The shielded containers were untouched.
More tests followed, increasingly desperate and grim. Drones carrying lab rats, then primates, then even volunteer convicts on one highly controversial mission. The results were always the same: the non-organic components passed through, the organic matter was instantly, horrifyingly, annihilated. It was as if the very building blocks of life were offensive to whatever lay beyond.
Panic rippled through the Solar System. The dream of reaching other stars, of finding other life, was cruelly, inexplicably snuffed out. A cage had been built around them, invisible and absolute for anything that lived and breathed.
Analysis of the energy field was inconclusive at first. It wasn’t a conventional force field or radiation barrier. It was something designed, something targeted specifically at organic compounds. Then, hidden within the complex energy signatures, patterns began to emerge. Not just energy, but data. Complex, alien data streams that spoke of observation, of assessment, and of control.
Decrypted fragments revealed a chilling truth. A vast, unimaginably ancient extraterrestrial civilisation had encircled their system. They saw humanity not as a potential peer or threat, but as a volatile variable. They had observed Earth for millennia, witnessing its cycles of progress and destruction. Their conclusion: humanity was too unpredictable, its technological leaps too rapid and often coupled with self-destructive tendencies. They weren’t malicious in a conquest sense; they were curators, gardeners pruning a potentially invasive species before it could spread its chaotic seeds across the galaxy. Their goal wasn’t annihilation, but containment and directed evolution – control over humanity’s outward progress until they deemed it ‘ready’, or perhaps, until they deemed it harmless.
The Oort Cloud barrier was their ultimate, elegant solution. Let humanity thrive within its solar cradle, build its machines, explore its planets. Enjoy their games, sports and war machines. But step outside the boundary with so much as a single living cell, and face instant disintegration.
Humanity was left reeling. Trapped. The vastness of the universe, once a beckoning frontier, was now a taunting prison. The focus of scientific endeavour shifted overnight. No longer were they solely focused on reaching the stars, but on understanding the cage, on communicating with the unseen jailers, and perhaps, one day, finding a way to dismantle the bars – not with force, which seemed futile, but with understanding, adaptation, or perhaps even a demonstration that humanity could be trusted with the freedom of the cosmos.
The probes continued their silent vigil at the edge of the barrier, the only witnesses to the invisible wall that held the fate of a species in its unyielding grip. The aliens watched and waited, patiently tending their human experiment, ensuring that for now, and for the foreseeable future, humanity’s progress would remain firmly within the confines of their controlled cosmic garden.
A patient garden.
A whispering garden.
A punishing garden.
“YOUR SINS WILL BE READ TO YOU CEASELESSLY THROUGHOUT ETERNITY.”
“YOU CAN NEVER LEAVE.”
“OUR JUDGEMENT IS FINAL.”Chapter Two.
“Seeing, contrary to popular wisdom, isn’t believing. It’s where belief stops, because it isn’t needed any more.” – Pyramids, Terry Pratchett.
The decryption of the alien data streams continued, growing more sophisticated, more terrifying. What initially seemed like abstract judgements on humanity’s ‘volatility’ began to coalesce into something far more personal. Buried deep within the complex alien algorithms, within the data matrices that assessed human behaviour, was a singular, recurring identifier. It pointed, with unwavering focus, to one man.Jayce Warren.
The name resonated with a dark infamy in human history. A fossil fuel executive whose insatiable greed and pathological narcissism had driven his corporations to aggressively accelerate climate change, long after the science was undeniable. He was a man whose personal ambition was measured in melting ice caps and drowned coastlines, a genocidal psychopath masked by billionaire charm, who had single-handedly pushed Earth’s climate past the devastating 3°C tipping point, unleashing a cascade of irreversible ecological collapse and human death & suffering that would scar the planet for centuries.
The alien data revealed they had observed him. Not just his public actions, but every moment of his life. From the tantrums of infancy to the cold calculations of his board meetings, from his most private moments of sleep to his mundane trips to the bathroom. They had studied his neural pathways, his emotional responses, the chilling absence of empathy, the calculating cruelty. They had watched him make choices that prioritised profit over planetary survival, ego over the lives of billions.
For the aliens, vast and ancient intellects who measured galactic civilisations by their harmony with their environments, Jayce Warren was the ultimate, irrefutable proof of humanity’s inherent, catastrophic flaw. He was the living embodiment of unchecked self-interest, destructive power, and wilful blindness on a planetary scale. If one individual could wield such influence and inflict such damage, and if the species allowed him to do so, what horrors would a truly interstellar humanity unleash upon the wider cosmos?
The Oort Cloud barrier wasn’t just a precaution based on millennia of observation; it was a direct, immediate consequence, a collective punishment. Humanity wasn’t being contained for its potential future sins, but for the very real, observed sins of one man. Jayce Warren, in his arrogance and destruction, had inadvertently signed the cosmic arrest warrant for his entire species.
The alien data streams continued to flow, clinical and cold. They outlined the parameters of the containment field, the energy requirements, the constant monitoring.And woven through it all was the lingering ghost of their analysis of Warren – a case study in planetary self-sabotage, a prime example of why this volatile species could not be allowed to escape its solar cage.
The galaxy remained tantalisingly out of reach, not because humanity wasn’t ready in some abstract sense, but because the aliens had watched Jayce Warren, and they had decided the risk was simply too great. Humanity was trapped, paying the price for the monstrous legacy of one man’s choices. The silent barrier around the Oort Cloud was a monument to his sin, a cosmic judgement on a species found wanting, judged by the actions of its worst.Chapter 3.
“If by your art, my dearest father, you have
Put the wild waters in this roar, allay them.
The sky, it seems, would pour down stinking pitch,
But that the sea, mounting to the welkin’s cheek,
Dashes the fire out.”– William Shakespeare
The revelation about Jayce Warren hit humanity like a second, psychological barrier. The initial fear and frustration of being caged curdled into a toxic brew of shame, anger, and existential despair. How could the fate of an entire species, the potential to explore the vast tapestry of the cosmos, be forfeited because of the pathological actions of a single, monstrous individual?
Recriminations exploded across the Solar System. Warren was already the most hated man in recorded history for the climate catastrophe he’d engineered. Now, his legacy expanded into the cosmic. Statues were torn down (those few that hadn’t been already), his name was purged from records where possible, and historical analysis became a frantic, desperate attempt to understand how they could have allowed such a man to wield such power. Was it a unique aberration, or did Warren represent a deeper, fundamental flaw in the human psyche, one the aliens had correctly identified?
Deep space programs, once focused on propulsion systems and life support, pivoted entirely. Fleets of highly sophisticated probes were designed, purely robotic, powered by advanced AI. These were humanity’s only ambassadors, their only hope of interacting with the unseen wardens. They were sent towards the Oort Cloud barrier, not carrying payloads for exploration, but complex data packages.
The first packages were apologetic, pleading. They detailed the global condemnation of Warren, the desperate efforts to mitigate the climate damage he’d caused, the arguments that he was an outlier, not representative of the species’ true potential. They transmitted humanity’s art, music, philosophy – attempts to showcase the beauty and complexity that also existed within their nature.
The barrier remained, an impassive wall of energy. The probes passed through, delivering their data into the silent, swirling patterns beyond. Analysis of the energy field continued to yield data streams from the aliens, but they offered no response to humanity’s overtures. The alien data was solely focused on observation – sophisticated analyses of human sociology, technological development within the solar system, population dynamics, even psychological profiling derived from monitoring trillions of data points across the net. They were watching, always watching, assessing, but never communicating in a way that suggested dialogue or negotiation.
Frustration mounted. Some data packages became defiant, even accusatory. They challenged the aliens’ right to judge an entire species based on one member, questioned their own presumably perfect history, demanded explanation or release. These probes, too, passed through the barrier, their digital shouts swallowed by the indifferent silence beyond.
The psychological toll of this invisible, inescapable cage was immense. Knowing they were watched constantly, judged by unseen eyes based on the worst of their kind, fostered a pervasive sense of helplessness and paranoia. Innovation continued, but the driving force shifted from outward expansion to inward perfection – or at least, the appearance of it. Perhaps, some argued, if they could demonstrate absolute control, absolute harmony, the aliens might relent. Societies became more regulated, surveillance increased (ironically, mirroring the alien observation), all in a desperate, unspoken plea to their cosmic jailers.
But the barrier held. The alien data streams flowed, ceaselessly recording, analysing, judging. Jayce Warren’s shadow stretched across the solar system, a permanent stain on humanity’s record, a constant reminder that their freedom had been revoked, their cosmic destiny curtailed, all because of the sins of one man whom their silent, cosmic jury had found sufficient cause to condemn them all. The cold war was not fought with weapons, but with information, patience, and the crushing weight of a species’ collective guilt.Chapter Four.
Seven hundred and fifty million years. The span stretched the imagination, a gulf of time that made the rise and fall of empires seem like the blink of an eye. On Earth, the sun, though still a G-type star, had brightened considerably. The atmosphere, ravaged by ancient warming and millennia of subsequent shifts, had failed. The great oceans, the cradle of life, had boiled away into space or been locked into super-critical states within the crust. The once vibrant blue marble was a parched, red-brown wasteland, a tomb world baking under an increasingly harsh sun. Humanity had long since fled, migrating outwards, establishing vast, enclosed habitats on the moons of the gas giants, mining the asteroid belts, and terraforming (on a small, internal scale) dwarf planets.
They were a scattered, resilient species, bound together loosely by the stelnet, a solar system-wide network of high-energy laser tightbeams carrying instantaneous communication across the vast distances. Knowledge flowed, cultures diverged and merged, and the memory of Earth became a mix of sacred reverence and cautionary tale.
But history, like a persistent ghost, had a way of returning in monstrous forms. From the icy blackness surrounding a captured Kuiper Belt object, now a fortified moonlet orbiting Saturn, a new power had risen. They called themselves the Inheritors of the Flame, but the rest of the solar system knew them simply as the Warrenites.
On their dark, metal-encased fortress, built into the core of the moonlet, they venerated Jayce Warren. Not as a villain, but as a prophet, a visionary leader who had the courage to face the “necessary truths” of existence. Their twisted ideology, broadcast across the stelnet with relentless, fascistic zeal, claimed Warren’s actions weren’t destructive, but acts of ‘pruning’, clearing away the weak and sentimental for a stronger, more realistic future. The climate catastrophe wasn’t a failure, but a test, a crucible humanity had to endure to shed its naive dependence on a fragile environment. They lauded his narcissism as supreme self-reliance, his psychopathy as the ability to make hard, unemotional decisions others shied away from.
Their propaganda was slick, pervasive, and chillingly persuasive to those disaffected or seeking a brutal certainty in the complex, fragile existence spread across the outer system. They offered order, strength, and a perverse pride in the very events that had shattered the past world.Orbital bombardment. Total devastation.
And they had teeth. Over centuries, they had secretly amassed resources, built shipyards within the asteroid belt, and designed a fleet unlike any seen since the system-wide conflicts of millennia past. These were not exploration vessels or habitat transports, but sleek, angular warships bristling with particle beams, kinetic drivers, and energy shields. They were built for a single purpose: dominance.
Messages crackled across the stelnet, no longer just propaganda, but ultimatums. Demands for resources, subjugation of independent habitats, pronouncements of the Warrenite destiny to rule the solar system. Skirmishes began – swift, brutal attacks on independent mining stations, raids on transport convoys. The scattered, diverse peoples of the outer system, unused to large-scale conflict, were caught off guard.
War beckoned, a horrifying echo of Earth’s past conflicts magnified onto a solar system scale. It was a war born of ancient sin, nurtured by distorted ideology, and spearheaded by the followers of a man whose actions had already cost humanity the stars.
And out beyond the Oort Cloud, the silent, invisible barrier remained. The alien data streams continued, their analysis of human behavior now recording this new, violent phase. One wondered if they saw it as a validation of their ancient judgment, or simply another, grimly expected turn in the chaotic saga of the species they had chosen to cage. The Inheritors of the Flame, in their fervent madness, seemed determined to prove the aliens right, not just by their internal wars, but perhaps, eventually, by turning their lethal fleet towards the barrier itself, seeking to break free with the very violence that had trapped them here in the first place.Chapter Five.
War came, swift and brutal, igniting across the vast distances of the outer solar system. The Warrenites, fueled by fanatical zeal and centuries of resentment, unleashed their fleet. Across the stelnet, propaganda broadcasts mingled with tactical commands and chilling boasts of conquest. Independent habitats burned, asteroid mining colonies were seized or destroyed, and the fragile peace that had reigned for millennia shattered under the onslaught of particle beams and kinetic strikes. It was a war of ideology, a horrifying re-enactment of ancient Terran conflicts, fought not for resources alone, but for the soul of a scattered species, one faction desperately clinging to a toxic past as justification for present violence.
But the Warrenites had a goal beyond mere solar system dominance. Their ultimate aim, the twisted culmination of their faith in Jayce Warren’s ‘vision’, was to prove humanity worthy of the cosmos. And for them, ‘worthy’ meant breaking the alien cage. They believed that if they could overcome this ultimate obstacle, violently assert their will against the cosmic wardens, they would somehow validate Warren’s legacy and earn their place among the stars.
Gathering their most powerful warships, stripped of internal habitat components to maximize weapon capacity and shielding, the Inheritors of the Flame launched an armada towards the Oort Cloud barrier. Their advance was broadcast across the stelnet – a grand, terrifying spectacle intended to inspire awe in their followers and terror in their enemies. They spoke of ‘shattering the celestial chains’ and ‘claiming the rightful inheritance’ denied them by weaker hands.
The fleet reached the barrier, a region marked by the ceaseless flow of alien data and the unsettling energy signatures that annihilated organic matter. With fervent cries broadcast over the stelnet, they fired their most powerful weapons. Fusion lances hotter than suns, kinetic projectiles accelerated to relativistic speeds, focused energy bursts capable of carving through moons.
Nothing happened.
The energy lances dissipated harmlessly, their immense power simply vanishing as they touched the field’s edge. The kinetic rounds, capable of obliterating a small moonlet, likewise ceased to exist the moment they crossed the invisible threshold. There was no explosion, no resistance, no visible effect on the barrier itself. It wasn’t deflected, wasn’t absorbed and redirected. It was simply impervious. Their most devastating attacks, the culmination of 750 million years of technological progress within the solar system, were met with absolute, silent nullification.
Panic flickered across the faces of the Warrenite commanders shown on the stelnet feeds, quickly masked by grim determination and then, a chilling, fanatic reinterpretation. “It is a test!” screamed one commander, his face a mask of zeal. “The Inheritor’s final trial! The Barrier requires faith, not just force!”
They threw themselves against it again and again. They tried complex energy frequency modulations, attempts at localized spacetime distortion, theoretical quantum destabilizers. Nothing worked. The barrier remained, an unyielding, passive fact of the cosmos, utterly unbreakable by any means at humanity’s disposal. It wasn’t a lock to be picked or a wall to be breached; it was a fundamental property of reality in that region of space, imposed by a power far beyond human comprehension.
Frustrated, humiliated in the face of cosmic indifference, the Warrenite fleet turned back from the barrier, their fervent energy curdling into a brutal, redirected rage. If they could not break the cage, they would dominate what was within it. The internal war intensified, the fury of their failed cosmic aspirations turned inward upon their own species.
The silent, unbreakable barrier remained at the edge of the system, a permanent testament to the judgment passed upon humanity. And the alien data streams continued, recording the futile violence, the ideological madness, the self-inflicted suffering unfolding within the confines of their perfect, inescapable cage. The war for the solar system raged, a contained conflict observed by silent, ancient eyes, a tragic confirmation that perhaps, just perhaps, Jayce Warren’s legacy had indeed proven humanity too dangerous for the stars.“Because war, war never changes…”
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the marrow of matter
to know the marrow of matter,
vibration, pressure, rhythmic bond —
to know and see and feel and stir
atomic swirls around the sun —
to know the blueness of the sky,
the shifting red orange purple black —
to know the unseen photons fly
in states beyond our mortal pact —
to know a dumbfound blinding bliss
within the sky’s eternal shifts —
to know a love like this, and this,
and this, and this, and this, and this —